Alone on the world

[xMisato]

Hi

Hi! I'm Tessa or Misato, and I'm writing a new story, just for Midorea ^w^ Anyway, I'm not really good, and my english isn't good too. I'm sorry about that, I really am. But hey! I think I should keep practicing ^^

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She quietly walked into the living room. No mom, so she went to the balcony, the last thing where she could be. But there was no mom on the balcony either. Noëmi got scared and sat down just there, on the ground, an began crying. Her mom never leaved the house, she did everything at home. Her dad past away a few years ago, so they were alone, just the two of them. They did considering adoption, but they were scared they would run out of money. And Noëmi couldn't be able to work for some extra money, because she's only 9 years old. And now she sat on the balcony, crying, because there is no mom. After about one hour, she stood op, and got dressed. She would go to her grandpa, who lived a few streets further. She also packed her back-pack, with clothing and stuff. Then she grabbed her keys, and leaved the house. Brave she looked, but broken and scared she was. When Noëmi reached the street she counted every single step she made, and so she didn’t notice there was no one else, but her. After a few minutes she already was by the house of her grandpa. She stood on her toe’s and pressed the bell. No response. She tried it again, but still no response. She ringed every bell she came trough, but there was no response. But she didn’t give up! She did cry, but she would find anyone, even if it would mean her dead. After a few hours she ringed every bell she knew in the city, and there was no response. Noëmi started to feel lonely, and cried even harder. She felt like she was the only one on the world.

[xMisato]

After a while Noëmi realised crying doesn't help, and she got hungry as well. If it was true there was no one, she could just break in in someone's house. But what if this was just one big joke.. She didn't thought long about it, and threw a stone in the window of the closest supermarket. She took some meals she just had to warm up and ran out the supermarket. She really got scared about the fact she may be alone. She threw with the same stone at a window of a random house that looked cousy. She putted a meal in the microwave and waited till it would peep. But it didn't. She waited almost an hour, untill she realised the whole microwave didn't work. And there was no alarm at the supermarket as well.. She wanted to scream, what was this nightmare!? Why was everyone gone but her!? She sighed, and lied down on the ground. Something moved, and she looked around. Did it really move? Was there something moving but her?

[Iregyura]

Wow, it really good for an opening! Yes, crying doesn't help I wonder where her mom went?? Well, I suspect that this will be a sweet stories of a 9 year old girl If it doesn't, then make it like 9 years in the future!! That will be awesome Keep it up~~
Random Typo I found (Sorry, not trying to critisize )
Back-packs [backpacks]