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 PostPosted: Fri May 01, 2009 9:48 am Reply with quote        
This is just something I've been working off and on for a few years. The only crit I got was from my friends and they never said anything bad but I'm sure there's something I can improve on. Anyways, please read and comment. THANK YOU <3

Eons ago, when the world was new, angels and demons had a war over Earth. The battle lasted for years, killing angels, demons, and humans alike. Within the demons, were four demons that stood out over the rest as the most vicious and destructive. They killed anyone and anything that got in their way. God sealed the four demons away, but the Devil caught wind of this plan. Instead of sealing the demons away for all eternity, the Devil changed the seal so the demons would be reborn to wreck havoc on the land once again.

This is their story…

Chapter One

“RAN!! Where do you think you’re going?!” A long haired blond shouted.
The blond girl had brown eyes and was wearing a maroon colored sweater with a black skirt. Her undershirt that was a regular white button down shirt with a black tie. Her stockings were also white and knee high and had on a pair of black shoes. She had her hands on her hips as she was glaring at the other teenager that was walking away from her.
The male was around the same age as the girl. He had black hair that fell in front of his red eyes. He was wearing a white button down shirt with a black tie that was loose around his neck. His shirt was not tucked and a maroon jacket was wrapped around his waist. He stopped to turn at the girl and rubbed the back of his head, one hand still in his pants pocket.
“Why do I have to tell you?” He asked.
“Because I’m the student council president and I’m in charge of where my classmates as going,” she said as she glared.
“Botan, I’ve told you before,” he said as he moved his hand from behind his head to his ear, and itched it slightly. “I can care less about your duties, and your little ’do good’ attitude. Whatever I do is none of your business.”
“Oh, we’ll see about that,” she said with a satisfied smirk.
Ran blinked his eyes slightly and heard a small clanking noise. He looked to see the gate was starting to close. He glared back at Botan and turned around to start running at the gate.
“This is UNFAIR!!” He shouted.
He ran towards the gate and slide on the ground, barely missing the gate. When he stood back up, he had dirt all over the left side of his shirt, along with his pants. He stood up and ran a hand through his hair.
“RAN WANAGI YOU GET RIGHT BACK HERE THIS INSTANT!!” Botan shouted at him.
“Sorry Botan,” he said with a wave. “But the gates closed, looks like I won’t be able to get in without the authority of the teacher, and what’s this? All the teachers are INSIDE teaching. Looks like I’m going home for today.”
The girl just stood on the other side of the fence, fuming as she watched the raven haired teenager leave the school grounds. On that same side was an older man, he had dark brown hair that covered over the right side of his face. A pair of shades covered up his eyes as he stood over at the corner. He was wearing a black suit with a dark blue button down shirt and a black tie. A cell phone rested against his ear as he watched Ran walk down the street with his hands in his pockets.
“Looks like I found him,” the man said.
“Which one?” A woman’s voice said on the other end.
“Ran Wanagi,” he said as he saw Ran turn the corner. “Doesn’t look like he knows.”
“Have you found the other one yet?” She asked.
“No, not yet. I’m heading there next,” he said as he started to walk towards a dark blue convertible parked down the street.
“Be careful,” she said as there was a click.
The man stepped into the car and started to drive down the street. He was stopped by several lights, and drove for almost 45 minutes until he had reached his next destination. It was another school, but it was also another high school.
The school was two floors, and outside of it was it’s large sign. Private Hoji Elementary. Several young students were sitting outside at the bleachers as they talked about school work. Even though there were several middle school students laughing and talking, but there was one lone student sitting away from them all. He couldn’t be any older then 10 years old. He had blond hair that gently brushed over his eyes. He had glasses that covered up his green eyes and was wearing an orange shirt with a blue rim against the collar and sleeves. He had blue shorts and brown shoes with white socks. A book rested in his lap as his palm rested against his mouth as his eyes searched the words on the book. Beside him, were even more books and a brown backpack.
“Yuu!” Came a shout.
The blond looked up to see some girls walking over to him. They stood over him for a few minutes and talked to him. He just smiled and nodded as he talked back and they giggled as they waved and walked off. The boy waved back and then looked to see the stranger watching him from the distance. The man waved to him slightly, as Yuu waved back.
The bell rang and all the students started to get up and move towards the school building. Yuu just sat there and the two watched each other, as if it was some kind of staring contest. One of the girls that was talking to him before yelled for him, and he looked back at her. He looked back to see that the stranger was gone now, and blinked his large green eyes. The child stood up and started to head back to the school. He turned his head to look back at the gateway, and the man was still gone. He sighed to himself as he walked into the school building.
“So?” Said the woman from the phone before.
“He’s here too,” said the man.
“Did you talk to him?”
“No, the bell rang.”
“Well, we don’t have to rush it,” she started.
There was a loud crash and a few swear words could be heard on the woman’s side of the phone.
“Where are you at?” He asked.
“Working of course, speaking of which I better go back. It’s getting busy here.”
“I’ll call you later.”
“OK.”
He got off the phone once again and sighed a little too himself. He stepped back into the car and started to dive away from the other school once more. He headed away from the schools and residence area towards the business parts of town. He passed several large buildings and then pulled into one. The sign outside the building read ‘Tenoh Inc.’ He pulled into a parking spot that was labeled ‘President’ and stepped out of the car. A woman stood out there waiting on him.
She had short dark blue hair that curled around her cheeks. Her blue eyes closed as she smiled at him. She was wearing a purple button down shirt that ended at the elbows and a black skirt that ended above her knees. She also had on a pair of black heels and continued to smile.
“Mr. Tenoh, your meeting was moved from noon today to 3 this afternoon,” she said as she and the man walked towards the elevator.
She swiped a card into a card slot and the elevator started to go up. The light started to go up on the floor board and reached the 10th floor, but kept going. It reached up the 51st floor and the door finally dinged open.
“Any other news you’d like to tell me, Umi?” He asked as the two stepped through the elevator door.
“Oh yes, Jyou is waiting for you in your office,” she said as she stopped at a desk that she placed some papers on.
“Wonderful,” he said as he waved his hand. “Don’t bother me until he leaves, this is going to take a while.”
Umi nodded and sat down at the desk and started to fill out papers. The man walked into the other room and closed the door behind him.
“Wonderful view you have here,” said another voice coming from the chair.
The man looked to see another man sitting in a chair that overlooked the city.
“Jyou,” he said as he crossed his arms.
“Is that the love you have for your brother Shiro?” Jyou asked as he stood up, and faced the brunette.
The man looked a little similar to Shiro. Except instead of having brown hair, he had dark green hair. He was also wearing a brown suit, but with an open white button down shirt.
“The brother that continues to try and run my own business into ruin, is accusing me of not showing any love,” Shiro said as he walked over to take his own chair.
His brother smiled as he placed his hand on the desk and leaned over. “Shiro, come on. We both know that our business are the best out there. If we can combine our powers we can take over all the other stores out there!”
“You are too power hungry. If I let you have even one percent of my company, you would try to take over it and then some,” Shiro said as he crossed his legs and placed his elbows onto the arm rest as he laced his fingers together.
“I would never step over my wonderful brother’s boundaries,” Jyou smiled.
“I said no,” Shiro said, his shades still covering his eyes.
Jyou now had a very angry scowl on his face. His fist clenched and he pushed himself away from the desk and over towards the door.
“You’re making a bad choice here, LITTLE brother,” Jyou said as he went to pull the door open and Umi stood there. “Out of my way.”
He pushed her out of the way and she gasped as she dropped some of her papers. Shiro sighed as he stood up and walked over to his assistant and started to help her pick up pictures.
“Some brother that is,” Umi said, nodding her head to the closing elevator door.
“Don‘t remind me we‘re related,” Shiro said as he shifted the paperwork.
“I‘ll try not too,” Umi said with a smile.
“Don’t worry, I’ll give you permission to slap me if I get that bad,” Shiro said with a small chuckle.
“Don’t worry, I wouldn’t even have asked for your permission,” she said with a laugh. “Oh, by the way, your three o’clock called, it’s back to noon. You have 5 minutes.”
“…. Thanks.”
Iregyura



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 PostPosted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 10:13 pm Reply with quote        
Awesome~~ Keep up the awesome work~~ *Can't wait for more YAY* Wink
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Post as often as possible Laugh No pressure, of course Bouncy Heart But remember that YURA is looking for ward to it Big Grin
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