Raezarin
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 11:13 pm
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| 2/3 done. Too bad the last bits the worst...
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Maverik
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 11:17 pm
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| Really? What sort of troubles do you have with the final body paragraph and the conclusion? o-o
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Raezarin
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 11:21 pm
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| Ah, but I beg you to remember that this is an "essay". Meaning that it is three argumentative paragraphs that my teacher likes to call an "essay".
The first is basically a list of arguments for the thesis.
The second is a list of arguments against the thesis.
And the last is a final argument for the thesis supported by evidence and examples.
All in french.
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Maverik
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 11:29 pm
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| o.O Really? That's a different structure than what I'm used to.
I mean, for me, the-... oh, wait.
Never mind, I get what you mean. x.X My brain's a little slow on the uptake.
Regardless, you have an outline, don't you? If so, all you need to do is figure out how to word things.
x.X Then again, I only have experience in English writing.
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Raezarin
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 11:45 pm
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| French is different, its less the wording, more the grammar. We're used to English grammar, and we don't have to think about it was we write/speak. With French the rules are completely different so it takes a conscious effort to stick to the French rules of grammar rather than using the English ones (the result is what you call franglais)
Edit: DONE! Time to get my sleep-deprived ass to bed. Good night Maverik!
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Maverik
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 11:58 pm
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| x3 Sleep is useful. Glad to hear you finished it, too.
G'night Raezarin. ^^
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neomattlac
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Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 2:02 pm
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Raezarin wrote: |
French is different, its less the wording, more the grammar. We're used to English grammar, and we don't have to think about it was we write/speak. With French the rules are completely different so it takes a conscious effort to stick to the French rules of grammar rather than using the English ones (the result is what you call franglais)
Edit: DONE! Time to get my sleep-deprived ass to bed. Good night Maverik! |
God. I was even thinking about teaching myself French.
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Raezarin
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Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:20 pm
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| Oh, teaching yourself is fine, just don't let someone else shove verb conjugations down your throat for 5 years with various degrees of efficiency.
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Vidd187
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:16 am
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| Usermane Vidd187
Reference My Current Avatar any pose sans wepons
Style line art waste shot type thingy
Other IDK make her happy
Colour? no
thank you if you get to mine
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Freshie
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:45 am
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| I dunno if its too late for this ^^;;
If not..
Username: Freshie
Reference: My current avatar, I won't change it. ^^
Style: Line art, full-body?
Other: Can you make her peaceful? ^^;;
Colour? Only if you'd like. :3
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Maverik
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 2:17 am
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| I don't think it's ever too late for you, Freshie. :: Pokes your staffiness, then mutters something about a double standard ::
x3 Just joking around.
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About the double standard part, not the don't-think-it's-too-late part. =P
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Raezarin
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 10:56 am
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| I'll take them both, just keep in mind that I will be slower then last time due to being forced to endure the strange and unual punishemt so erroneous called "School"
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Freshie
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:01 pm
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| Thats ok, I understand. ^^
*pokes Maverik* :P
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Raezarin
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 8:27 pm
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| Waaa! No spontaneous combustion in this thread! Didn't you see the sign?!
(On a side note, purposely setting yourself on fire is perfectly fine as long as the proper forms are filled out)
*douses Maverik with water*
Don't make me get the hose!
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