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 PostPosted: Sun May 31, 2009 2:16 am Reply with quote        
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On a cold dark evening, a young girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass castle that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she [ran]


But where did she run to? D:::

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 PostPosted: Sun May 31, 2009 8:53 am Reply with quote        
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On a cold dark evening, a young girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass castle that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she ran [to]


I don't know lol

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 PostPosted: Sun May 31, 2009 11:43 am Reply with quote        
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On a cold dark evening, a [ugly] girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass castle that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she ran to


I changed the word "young" in to "ugly"... because I felt like that xD

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On a cold dark evening, an ugly girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass castle that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she ran to [the]


Adding "THE" to the last sentence...

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On a cold dark evening, an ugly girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass castle that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she ran to the [bridge]


The bridge to nowhere! x)

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On a cold dark evening, an ugly girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass castle that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she ran to the bridge [to]


NO! the bridge to Michael Jeckson's Neverland! XD

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On a cold dark evening, an ugly girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass [dump] that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she ran to the bridge to cool


I change the glass castle to glass dump and add a cool in the sentence
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 PostPosted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 4:43 am Reply with quote        
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On a cold dark evening, an ugly girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass [castle] that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she ran to the bridge to cool


I change the dump back to castle because I liked that better xD xP

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 PostPosted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 2:24 pm Reply with quote        
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On a cold dark evening, an ugly girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass [castle] that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she ran to the bridge to [the] cool[est]


@Tsumi LOL MJ Bouncy Heart

I changed it so that she's running to the coolest something! Happy

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On a cold dark evening, an ugly girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass [castle] that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she ran to the bridge to the coolest [ranch]


@glimpse: <3

I added the ranch so she can run to michael xD

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On a cold dark evening, an ugly girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass castle that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she ran to the bridge to the coolest [cave] [but]


Changes ranch to cave and added but!!!
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On a cold dark evening, an ugly girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass castle that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she ran to the bridge to the coolest cave but [then]


added 'then' O___o

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On a cold dark evening, an ugly girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass castle that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she ran to the bridge [into] the coolest cave but then


Just felt it sounds better...

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On a cold dark evening, an ugly girl was walking down a rainbow path with her trusty slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a glass castle that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the hamburgers of the darkness. As the moon rose higher, she ran to the bridge into the coolest cave [ever] but then


added something ^

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On a [Super Hot] dark evening, an [beautiful] girl was walking down a rainbow path with her [envious] slave following her from behind. In front of her she saw a [Golden] castle that reflected images of human misery and torture. She knew that in this castle she'll find her cursed worm, whom was stolen by the [Peanuts] of the darkness. As the moon [goes] higher, she [and her envious slave flew over] the bridge into the coolest cave ever but then[, something]


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