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Uhhmm.. I'm not a pro with grammar, I admit quite openly, but there are some mistakes on Midorea that are really obvious to me. The most glaring of all of these mistakes (because it's the first thing you see when you visit midorea) would have to be on the splash page.
Merr's Edited version of the Midorea splash page:
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Midorea is a small forum- and avatar-based community.
We are all very close-knit, but we always look forward to seeing new users become a part of the community.
We offer a more mature atmosphere than most other avatar sites, but all new users are welcomed regardless of age (please make sure to get your legal guardian's permission first if you are under thirteen).
Even though we are still small, each day we continue to grow.
However, we can only grow when users actively participate in the forums.
So, please, before you join remember that the only way we can become bigger is if you become an active member of the community.
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The Newbie Store
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"Hello. Welcome to the newbie store; the currency we take here is copper. Thank you, and have a nice day. " |
Defense and Offense are spelled with 'S'es, not 'C's.
Newbie Guide
Currencies, not Currency's
... these are all here because of one thing... newbies (like Merr) see them first orz
If anyone else has noticed something that really fries their beans grammar- or usage-wise, post here and help out! Please?
I'm sorry if I seem like I'm being evil, but a couple people told me it wouldn't be bad for me to post this... so I am!
I'm not trying to completely overhaul the site with grammar, just pointing out some things that I noticed right away by just skimming the site for the 'first time'.
Sorry if this is an annoyance.. T_T;
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