killerkitty
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 Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 12:39 pm
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| This is a forum game in which we can make haikus together. Yay! If you don't know what a haiku is, then it is a kind of chinese or japanese poem with three verses (it doesn't have to rhyme). First one with five syllables, second one with seven, and third one with five again. Example:
As the butterflies,
Flutter in the night-time air,
I lay down and smile.
Ok, so this time, as I already said, we can make one together! First person says three syllables of the first verse, second person says the two remaining, third person says first four syllables of the second verse, fourth person says the three remaining, fifth and sixth people do the same as first and second. Example:
1st person: Icecream is...
2nd person: Icecream is very good
3rd person: Icecream is very good,
That's why we will...
4th person:Icecream is very good,
That's why we will jump around
2nd person: Icecream is very good,
That's why we will jump around
In the sun...
4th person: Icecream is very good,
That's why we will jump around
In the sun with joy.
1st person: Bacon and...
Ok so I begin: When we wish...
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Teralyn
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 12:44 pm
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| When we wish... for light.
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The fallen  And her Guardian  Forever to Wander aimlessly upon the back of 
Claimed; Transcendence |
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killerkitty
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:53 pm
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| When we wish for light,
Electric souls...
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They/Them
O shucks what's up buddy |
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WillowKitsune
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Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 12:08 am
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| When we wish for light,
Electric souls float to us
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Lily Cat
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Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 2:33 am
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| When we wish for light,
Electric souls float to us
Brighter than
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aka. Taruto |
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eisylefae
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 12:36 am
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| When we wish for light,
Electric souls float to us
Brighter than still moon.
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Please feed Symbiose so he can mutate! ^-^ |
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Taruto
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 8:36 am
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| ((If I can just add something... Haiku are also supposed to make sense if you reverse the order of the sentences. But that may be a challenge.))
From afar
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eisylefae
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:11 pm
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| (wait, huh? That's interesting. I'm disappointed in myself that I didn't know that.  You are meaning when read backwards, from last verse to first verse? I could google it but I believe you, am just a little confused ^-^)
From afar we all
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Please feed Symbiose so he can mutate! ^-^ |
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Lonely Bones
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 2:07 pm
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| From afar we all
Look upon blue...
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the future freaks me out.
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killerkitty
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Posted: Fri May 28, 2010 11:00 am
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| (:o really? I had no idea...)
From afar we all
Look upon blue sapphire skies
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O shucks what's up buddy |
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Atraea
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Posted: Fri May 28, 2010 11:44 am
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| From afar we all
Look upon blue sapphire skies
Dreaming of...
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beesthatbuzz
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 12:18 pm
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| From afar we all
Look upon blue sapphire skies
Dreaming of our flight
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