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 PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 9:51 pm Reply with quote        
So Here Are A Few Of My Art Stuff. . . What do you think?

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs929.snc4/74246_501925317952_704082952_7024021_4435019_n.jpg

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 PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 9:52 pm Reply with quote        
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 PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 9:53 pm Reply with quote        
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 PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 9:54 pm Reply with quote        
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 PostPosted: Wed Nov 10, 2010 9:26 am Reply with quote        
that skull at the bottom is pretty awesome :3

also i really like the fairy, its a cool style you drew it in. the only critique i have of that one is the breasts; i know theyre difficult to get right, believe me XD but they ought to be lower down. look at some photos of women - you have the shoulders and collarbone, then a little space underneath, and then the breasts. obviously the ammount of space differs from person to person, but they are never quite that high up ^^

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 PostPosted: Wed Nov 10, 2010 12:55 pm Reply with quote        
Sorry, I had to edit your posts since your pictures were too big for the layout. They should be at max 600x600 pixels so they don't stretch the page. Wink

I agree with ecco about the fairy. It's really nice, but at the same time, it looks more like some over-sized pectorals than breasts, which is sort of weird. Normally, nipples are two heads down from the top of the head (or one head down from the bottom of the head, if you prefer). They are even a bit lower for women, since breasts hang down a little.
I suggest looking at this book from Andrew Loomis. There are a few simple charts of proportion that are really easy to learn and can then be applied to various style of drawing without problem (page 54 for a woman).

But yeah, your pictures are really nice. I especially love that skull ^^

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 PostPosted: Wed Nov 10, 2010 9:19 pm Reply with quote        
Thank you guys.

I don't know. I kind of like the way she looks, I don't really like the whole natural feeling. I suppose it's because that would make her look way to realistic and I wasn't really shooting for that. Hm, I don't really know ^_^;

Wow that started with wayyy to many I's. . .

Thank you for editing them btw!
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 PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 8:07 am Reply with quote        
ahh fair enough Smile something to keep in mind when drawing humans tho, at least ^^

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 PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 1:57 pm Reply with quote        
Thank you, really! I appreciate y'alls help though Cool Very cool of you both!
I want to draw something but I don't particularly know what I want to do so you guys have any ideas?
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