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Does my Poetry suck?
I'd rather stab my face with a spork than read it! DX
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I'd rather watch paint dry man!-.-
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yes
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no comment
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no
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nice but needs some work
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I love it! keep it up! ^-^
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 PostPosted: Thu May 28, 2009 8:29 am Reply with quote        
The rain swiftly falling,
The mist loudly calling,
The lake rapidly rising,
The dragon calmly advising,
The sky quickly darkening,
The trees slowly wakening,
The heart ever beating,
The world constantly needing.

(cont. my poem)
Exrael



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 PostPosted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:22 am Reply with quote        
It's quite minimalistic, but I like it! ^^ Your poetry can go places. :]
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