SasorizaKitty X Water_Magician13

[SasorizaKitty]

((We can start here! I'll post first, so you will understand the setting. I'm going to use my character Red.))

((Here's a few pointers for your beginning post! Read what you type out loud to see if it makes sense. If you are unsure how to fix it, post it in Word and Spell Check it and see what the program says.))

The day was a warm one, actually very hot, and though a dry wind blew gently, it did little to cool Red down. The petite woman had made her way down to Idra Lake, a beautiful, crystal clear lake that was surrounded completely by forest. In the middle of the lake was a small island, that if someone tried, they'd be able to swim to.

Red wasn't interested in swimming to the island, however. She was more interested in simply dipping her bare feet into the cool water at the lake's edge. She brushed her bushy ginger hair back and stared out across the water, studying the ripples absentmindedly.

((And remember! This session is a learning session! I don't mind helping you improve your RP skills, but please don't take offense to anything I might suggest doing. ^__^ ))

[Water_Magician13]

While red is lokking to the lake, she saw a shaddow!!!
Shaddow appeared and say, "Greetings to you, relaxing at the idra lake?! Well that's a good news"
Shaddow desappears with a puff of black smoke!!!

[[What about that?!]]

[SasorizaKitty]

((There were still some spelling mistakes there. Try posting it in Word first and clicking the Spell Check button. You are also god-moding a little. God-moding is when you control a character other than your own. You can't say that Red saw a shadow. Only I can say what Red sees or doesn't see, because she is my character. Understand? So I wouldn't be able to say something like: Shadow saw Red dancing. Shadow is your C, so only you can say what he sees. Its the same for more important things, like battles. You can attempt to strike the opponent, but you can't say that the strike hits or misses. That is up to the other person to decide.))

Red blinked a little at the sudden appearance of...well, what was that thing? A man or a shadow? The woman wasn't sure. And it was gone almost as quickly as it came. Well, maybe it would be back. Shrugging to herself, she continued looking out across Idra Lake.

((Try and make your posts past tense as well. That goes along better with third-person narratives))