In Shannons Mind...

[Kira Bella]

EDIT: I write what I think. Sometimes it might be a little more graphic then other times. Please, if you have a difference sence of ... maturity then others, do not read or crituiqe. I want ADULT reactions. And I want people to FEEL the anger, the hate, the sorrow of my characters.

I have thought long an hard about what I wanted to do on those boring nights when the re stocking of the shelvings is finished and the night still has hours to go. The facing is done, and the floors are clean.

So what do I think about? Storylines for books that I would someday like to write. Trouble is, I cant just sit down and type them up all willy nilly. I don't have a laptop anymore.

BUT. I can write them down here. I will write what I have come up with so far and such, and I in turn would like you all to reply your own thoughts and comments on them. And if you want more of the story, just ask. I would be happy to think up more.

In the next post, I will be writing one of my own personal stories that I was thining of, surprizingly around new years.

[Kira Bella]

"You mean so much to me Eli... I just want to be with you."

The heated words had barely left her trembling lips when his mouth crushed onto hers, bruseing and possesive. She moaned sharply in protest, and he pushed harder. His hards were searching, probing. Looking for that one inch of flesh that he so desperately craved.

"Eli.. Slow down... Please... Y-your hurt-ting me!", she yelled, pushing him off of her. Lately he had been getting too close to her, and she always had to yell to snap his thoughts out of the lust filled haze. Little did Kathyren know that even with the most innocent look, she could send him over the edge. He wanted her so badly, and she kept teasing him, taunting him with her body.

And she didn't even know that she was doing it.

"You.. you promised me tonight Kathyren" he muttered horsely, adjusting his pants to make him self more comfortable, which was easier said then done. She had been toying with him for three weeks now. Saying she wanted him and then always saying that they should wait.

Damn waiting.

"I never said I would have sex with you. What kind of girl do you think I am?" she said in a haughty tone. She began to put her hair back up in a pony tail when she spoke again. "You know, you really need to think straight. I can't just have sex with just any one. I mean, it has to be special..."

Special? He had given up everything for her! His mind was racing as he looked at her, dumbstuck. "You conceited bitch..." he whispered slowly.

"Excuse me?" she said as she stared at him in shock.

"You fucking heard me! You never intended to sleep with me did you?! You have been toying with me for weeks now for what?! A game?!" he roared, throwing his hands around in anger and pointing his finger in her face.

"You really thought I would have had sex with someone like you? Your family is worthless. The only good features you have are your looks and your mind, and thats not even worth praising!" she snarled, snatching herself away from his hands. She turned towards the door of his car. Looking back over her shoulder, she glared at him and spoke with a tone of cool distaste. "You are forgiven for this infacture. But don't let it happen again. I am only going with you to make Nathen Elliens jealous. You knew that before we started dating."

Knew? He had no clue. As she turned away from him, his control snapped. His hands shot out, grabbing her shoulders painfully tight and pulled her back into the car. Spinning her around so quickly she feared her neck would break, he slammed her beneathe him, his face a mask of rage and pain. "You said.. that you... LOVED ME" he screamed at her his hands creeping around her slender throat. He shook her with each word, screaming the words "You Said!" over and over.

He picked her up, her mind swimming, her vision blurry. She looked at his face and spit. Her blood and saliva hit him in the eye though he didn't notice. He was too far gone. He pulled her close and she started crying. "You deserve this..." he whispered in her ear, as he pushed her into the car door one final time. Her head smacked sickenly into the window, the glass shattering behind her head.

Her eyes went dark. And so did his heart. He pushed her limp arms from his waist, whiping blood from his hands on her shirt. He looked at her then. Her silky blonde hair was tangeled and bloody. Her perfect body was brusing already from his painful grips. And her shoulders and neck had hundreds of sliver cuts from the shattered glass.

But he could care less. He was finished with her. She was useless to him now. "Your not worth MY time Kathyren." He whispered as he backed out of the car, slamming the door in the process.

He pulled off his over shirt, tossing it onto the hood of the car. He was numb. Just a little rest, he thought. Then I will get rid of the body...

[Kira Bella]

Sorry for such a dark beginning story guys xD But thats what story I was thinking of the other day. A little dark to begin with but DEAL.

Hence the disclaimer at the front of the thread.

Anyway, here is another one that I was thinking of. Just something that I believe started as a dream.

[Andom]

I like it...It looks pretty good so far. <3

Keep us posted.

[poetsespresso]

It's a bit disorienting the way it's presented, perhaps it's best to make it from one point of view, and the closest it seems to be the point of view of is his, from what it sounds like the reasoning type and his actions.

It is dark, and if you want to publish it I'd send it to publications that do publish dark or high-intensity-issue-related material as their theme. Writer's Market is a basic resource book for finding places to send to, and they do have subcategories for genres of writing (all of them end in ...Market, I think.)

So has the first post not yet been edited or do you really not have a computer still?