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Gwendlyne



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 PostPosted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 12:15 pm Reply with quote        
I've been working on this base for a while now. Its my first in a long time. I'm really fond of dolling personal dolls on it but I would like to fix it up a bit more before I release it for public use.

Anyone care to give me a bit of advice on what to change and how?


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 PostPosted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:13 pm Reply with quote        
I think it's really lovely! I like the strong shading and the hand-on-hip pose. The only thing that jumps out at me as odd is that her back foot seems to be twisted toward the viewer, almost as if she's not really standing on it. I think that's because of the way you shaded the sole of her foot. Hope that helps!

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 PostPosted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:56 pm Reply with quote        
i'd say it's because it's on an angle pointed down instead of being straight out,

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Gwendlyne



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 PostPosted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 10:48 pm Reply with quote        
Its ment to be shaped for a heel >.< Since the characters I use it for are High Heel wearing ladys. I think it needs a more dramatic arch like someone suggested to me elsewhere.
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 PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 9:57 pm Reply with quote        
The eyes seem really far apart to me, but yeah, I think for the foot on the left is from above, the one on the right seems to be from below because of the shading. It might be the arch though.

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 PostPosted: Sat Apr 04, 2009 4:25 pm Reply with quote        

Old ------------------> New
Ok I have updated the base a lot the last month +


oppinions?
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 PostPosted: Sat Apr 04, 2009 5:25 pm Reply with quote        
Beautiful~

It will make a beautiful base ! I really like the detail in the shades =)

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 PostPosted: Sat Apr 04, 2009 5:29 pm Reply with quote        
Hello. Happy I wanted to say I love your base so much.. I needed to take a break so I decided to AA it & other things..

/fail at toes

Dang it, now I want to go re-do the Mido bases again. xD

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Gwendlyne



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 PostPosted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 4:44 pm Reply with quote        
You don't fail at toes that actually looks pretty nice.

No more redoing the bases you silly girl. There are more importain items to do. Like hot short mini skirts. xD I am tempted to use my blush pallet on the Mido base though.
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 PostPosted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 7:03 pm Reply with quote        
I like the revison of the base. Though your revision could use a little bit less of a pink purple color around the outside. The toe that is a little strange still could use some work. that leg looks shorter.
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