HenceForth
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 Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 8:19 pm
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| Welcome to my first ever sketchbook! yay, go me!
Any way I'd appreciate (really really appreciate) any constructive criticism that you may have on stuff I post here.
Just a forewarning I plan on posting IMG's instead of links but I'll try not to stretch the pages too bad.
So to start this sketch book off
This here is a character I've been trying to develop for a DA OC tourney, drawn when i should have been studying, used pen and multiply layers in photoshop for quick colour
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LOL UR FACE
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 2:56 am
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| Ooh very funky, I LOVE it! <3
Do you plan on opening a shop anytime soon? I would definitely buy!! <333
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HenceForth
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 9:30 am
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| I'll have an art shop up eventually, but photoshop died on me. I keep geting a message that says I'm missing some part of the program resulting in a launch failure. I'll need to get that worked out before I open anything up
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linkfreak131
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Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 10:42 pm
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| Not too crazy about his shirt (just seems flat to me) but i adore the headband and scarf. X3 I like the coloring of his headband. It's certainly interesting. xD His ear looks a bit too close to his eyes, though... But, then again, that could be just me. xD
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Mella
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Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 4:24 pm
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| Oh my, that's amazing! I like the ruffled hair and headband! But i'd have to agree with Link. Perhaps if the shirt was a different color? I don't like the orange much with it. Because the rest of the art is darker? I don't know. I'm not much of an artist, so maybe it's just my opinion xP
Keep up the good work!
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Farewell, my shadow, you who stand at the end of the path I chose not to follow. |
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HenceForth
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Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 9:11 pm
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| Thanks for the feedback guys(gals)!
I wonder, mabey the eye looks too close because of his glasses? Because to me it seems like his actually is too far away from his ear....
I noticed the shirt was off too, but I thought it was just because I didn't bother to shade it but the light colour definitly could be it, thanks!
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Vixie
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Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 10:37 pm
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| thats amazing, i love it <3
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Rai-Rai
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 12:21 am
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| Very well done I don't see anything wrong with the ear honestly. The shirt color does look off and flat that is due to the lack of shading though, but its all good. Over all I like this piece once you do get your photoshop fixed you should open up a shop.
(Wants photoshop badly. X3)
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HenceForth
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 7:22 pm
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| I finally managed to get photoshop back and do something worthwhile
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Aaya-Tan
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 8:48 pm
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| Ooouh cool! <3
But.. It should be "of AN intro". xD Not 'a'. An for when the next word starts with a vowel. <3
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Chere and Rose
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 10:42 pm
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| HenTh- Oh, I love dat picture.
Is photoshop hard to use?
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glimpse
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Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 8:40 am
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| The first picture, very cute! 
The only thing that irks me about the second picture seems to be a problem with proportions. D; To me, the legs seem to be too short for his body and his left bicep is noticeably bigger than the right. I was going to say, "oh wait it's perspective" but that doesn't seem right either. Also, his shadow looks incorrect, you know? Like, looking at where the light is hitting him, the shadow would be longer right? But I suck at shadows so don't take that to heart 
I think his idea is adorable, though. [I've always wanted a character based off color D:::]
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HenceForth
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Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:28 pm
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| Pshaw Grammar is for sissies.... but it would be a good idea for me to fix that
Glimpse you are awesome, and right on all accounts, I hadn't noticed the bicept thing, that should be easy enough to fix, and the shadow was done at the last second, but I really should paymore attention to things like that
Chere, I find photoshop easy to use, but I use a lot of short cuts that mean I get things done fast and they make the program easy to use but it means that my art will never be amazing
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