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 Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 6:12 pm
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| Right now he looks rather sickly...You may want to make the upper-torso wider and hips slimmer, this will make him look a lot healthier. I also agree that the arms should be a tad bit longer. Other than that, I have no complaints... Great job!
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Kira Bella
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Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 10:31 am
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| Arms should be a little longer, but maybe lower the hips a bit? His crotch is dead even with his hands, which is good, but then his legs seem a little long to me. Maybe give him a slimmer waist? And you..
Could you give him a different design? Like, maybe make him standing differently?
I mean, I like this stance, you can see the clothing well, and it mimicks that of the female, but is there even an option to chance the way he is standing?
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Angel
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Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 9:33 pm
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| Kira Bella wrote: |
Arms should be a little longer, but maybe lower the hips a bit? His crotch is dead even with his hands, which is good, but then his legs seem a little long to me. Maybe give him a slimmer waist? And you..
Could you give him a different design? Like, maybe make him standing differently?
I mean, I like this stance, you can see the clothing well, and it mimicks that of the female, but is there even an option to chance the way he is standing? |
Bases need to be as close as possible to their gender counterparts.
That way, people can interchangeably rotate amongst different-gender clothing without too many problems.
Look at both the heads. They're the exact same. ;D
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Catghost
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Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:55 am
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| I changed it around a bit... but now he looks like a stick. 
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Arikana
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Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 3:18 pm
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Angel
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Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 6:22 pm
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| Catghost wrote: |
I changed it around a bit... but now he looks like a stick.
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Add some definition, like some abs, to his stomach, and he won't look so much like one. :3
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Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:17 pm
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| I think the neck should be widened a bit, the arms lengthened, and the torso given more shape, so as not to make the legs look so unnaturally straight ^^
Otherwise quite nice :3
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Catghost
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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:06 pm
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| I kinda like how this one turned out... >w>'
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Angel
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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:09 pm
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| Other than the avatar's right ankle, I love it! :3
But, I'll mention again: The avatar's right ankle needs highlights on it. :3
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Catghost
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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:11 pm
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| I'll get to it when my computers working! >.>'
xD
But thanks!
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Angel
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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 2:05 pm
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| You're welcome. :3
It'll look great when that's fixed. :3
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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 3:25 pm
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Catghost
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Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 10:04 pm
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| Finally finished the male base! ^_^
Locking this thread since I don't need anymore critique. >w<
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