Crackers & Cheese~

[Pikmin]

Mine tends to wear out really quickly too, though my nails rarely break..
Probably 'cos I drink loads of milk, like a pint a day at least xD
And as for my foot, got ANOTHER appointment next week so hopefully I'll make some progress.

[neomattlac]

Kupsy - It might be a stress facture. Really hard to see on an xray, but it'll hurt for a long time, however there's nothing they can do about it except tell you not to walk on it.
Planar whatever just sounds like a pulled muscle. XD

[Pikmin]

Well, it's meant to be this weird muscle that... Oh I'm not a doctor, I don't know. e-e;
Would be annoying if it was a stress fracture though, 'cos I don't walk much as it is, and I doubt I'd get such a thing from swimming...
Bored of my foot. I shall hop everywhere.

[neomattlac]

Stress fractures are usually from a combination of being heavy and standing on your feet all day.

[Pikmin]

[Dr. Tick Tock]

Put the first line of the second draft in the first draft, and then go with the first draft.

The second one was obviously more angry, but displaying it like that to a teacher is a little unacceptable. You should keep those rants for friends and family, and try to keep everything professional so your teacher respects your decision and opinions more. Otherwise she will probably feel like she has to defend the people in her class, and won't be as accepting of your withdrawal.

Also, I say put the first line of the second draft in the first because it isn't clear whether you are quitting the class, or just complaining to the teacher.

Hope that helped a bit o 3o;

[Dr. Tick Tock]

Also, don't worry about it. I absolutely hate my generation, I can't listen to their god-awful "music" (I'm seriously starting to doubt that it IS music, and not a bunch of teenagers whining into a microphone), and I have always been the outcast. I went to college early because of it, and I love it there because most of them are actually mature, motivated people.

I don't know how to help you with friends... the only reason I have found friends older than me is because my sister always let me hang out with her and her friends, and they all liked me. I'm sure if it wasn't for her, no one in the age group I want to hang out with, would want to hang out with me.

I hope things get better soon D:

[Pikmin]

The first line of the second was actually meant to be in both, copy/paste fail on my part I think.
And tbh I only really wrote the second one in rage. A lot of things are getting to me lately and I never seem to get a chance to vent it, so I vented it.. to my keyboard.

And I normally get on with people older than me, for the same reasons as you.. But these people just seem nasty, want to get rid of people just so they can go on about their ridiculous love poems.

Ok, rant again really because I do need to say it: Their poems SUCK. Like seriously, whenever they get asked to pick a subject they pick "romantic beaches", "a golden field", etc... And they were so corny, like.. Imagine the worst, most cheesy card you've ever gotten. Ten times worse.
I know they can't hear this lol, but honestly it makes me feel a bit better after the way they've been, need a rage outlet... Considering learning martial arts but I have yet to decide which.

[Dr. Tick Tock]

Ahaha oh man, I know what you mean. I hate people who think poetry is all about putting together pretty sounding words. My friend had a poetry class, and they had to revise each other's poems, and I read some of the ones she was revising... they didn't even make sense. The girl was just shoving a bunch of things together because it sounded good, not because it had anything to do with the image she was trying to convey.

My friend and I would spend hours making fun of them xD we're awful people

You can always vent to me! Just send me a PM or something. I hate most humans, so I love listening to the humans that I do like complain about the rest of the idiots in the world. Because I totally relate!

[Pikmin]

Kupsy has written a poem!! \o\

Never did fit in,
With all this poetry,
When I try to begin,
You all just turn bitchy.

You just want an excuse,
To stay with your kind,
So frankly what's the use,
Of preaching to the blind.

Yes, you poets are all the same,
With your pointless metaphors,
Stop talking crap, you have no acclaim,
Your written words are eyesores.

Stop talking, please,
It pains me to listen,
Stop being such pansies,
It pains me to see it written.

That's enough poetry now,
Why would I want to write it,
You all who think you're highbrow,
When really it's all just s***.

... By all means say it's awful xD But it's really put me in a good mood now.
Well, that and noodles :3
And I do end up hating most people, but I don't want to.. So I still try lol. Most of the time I dunno why I bother any more /o\
Silly people listening to poo music.

[Weaseldale]

xDD

I'm in no position to judge your poem, but I giggled when you called them pansies.

And at poo music. I'm easily entertained. ><

/goes back to lurking

[Dr. Tick Tock]

Ahaha. I like it xD The last stanza breaks the rhythm a little bit... but ... who cares? It's your poem

[Sly]

Aw, I hope things get better for you soon, Kupsy. .3. And it's true, most people do suck, but I'm sure there are a few bearable ones out there...somewhere. >_> If you ever find any, do let me know. Also, just have to say: not all poets are pretentious, talentless, douchebags. You know, just sayin'....>.>;

[ninjamaos]

*Jumps up and down, waving arms* Um, not to toot my own horn, but I do feel that a defense of poets is necessary, given all the bashing that's going on.

Though Kupsy, I totally, completely sympathize with you and I hope that everything works out and you find a place where you're happy. And yes, a lot of young and amateur poets are total douches. Just remember, not all of us are...

[Dr. Tick Tock]

Hey hey hey! No one was bashing poets! I'm a poet myself, I even won a contest. In fifth grade. I was only talking about making fun of the bad poets.