Shizukesa
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 Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:15 pm
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| I have written a short story all you have to do is change one word in the paragraph to anything you want but please keep the same amount of words.
New rule!
Please post the story part in quote, and underline/bold the word you change.
You are free to add a little explanation at the bottom if you want.
Thanks!
One day Captin James T. Kirk landed the Enterprize in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of crop. Johnathan was shouting at the ship "Get off my corn!" when first officer Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captin Kirk himself steped out into the now cleared area of land. Immediately Clark used his superspeed to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing abillity. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming hostile Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your analasys?" "Ineffecient captin its something we have never dected before in our voyage."
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jo18
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Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 10:10 am
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| One day Captin James T. Kirk landed the Voyager in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of crop. Johnathan was shouting at the ship "Get off my corn!" when first officer Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captin Kirk himself steped out into the now cleared area of land. Immediately Clark used his superspeed to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing abillity. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming hostile Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your analasys?" "Ineffecient captin its something we have never dected before in our voyage."
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Beaux
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 1:32 pm
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killerkitty
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 12:55 pm
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| One day Captain James T. Kirk landed the Voyager in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of candy. Johnathan was shouting at the ship "Get off my corn!" when first officer Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captin Kirk himself stepped out into the now cleared area of land. Immediately Clark used his superspeed to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing ability. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming stylish Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your analysis?" "Inefficient captain its something we have never dected before in our voyage."
tch tch, so many spelling mistakes, like captin instead of captain 
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Aquila audax
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 1:36 am
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| One day Captain James T. Kirk landed the Voyager in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of candy. Johnathan was shouting at the ship "Get off my corn!" when first officer Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captin Kirk himself stepped out into the now cleared area of land. Immediately Clark used his rollerskates to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing ability. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming stylish Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your analysis?" "Inefficient captain its something we have never dected before in our voyage."
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Teralyn
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 12:08 pm
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| One day Captain James T. Kirk landed the Voyager in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of candy. Johnathan was shouting at the ship "Get off my corn!" when first officer Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captin Kirk himself stepped out into the now cleared area of land. Immediately Clark used his rollerskates to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing ability. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming stylish Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your analysis?" "Inefficient captain its something we have never dected before in our oatmeal."
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The fallen  And her Guardian  Forever to Wander aimlessly upon the back of 
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eisylefae
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Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 1:44 am
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| One day Captain James T. Kirk landed the Voyager in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of candy. Johnathan was shouting at the ship "Get off my corn!" when first officer Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captin Kirk himself stepped out into the now cleared area of land. Immediately Clark used his rollerskates to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing ability. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming stylish Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your pants?" "Inefficient captain its something we have never dected before in our oatmeal."
(idea: Would it help if the word we changed was put in bold? Sorry, I just needed some help to know what was already done ((though... it's fairly obvious, lol)) thanks ^-^ )
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kiroro
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Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 1:48 am
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| One day Captain James T. Kirk landed the Voyager in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of candy. Johnathan was shouting at the ship "Get off my chocolate!" when first officer Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captin Kirk himself stepped out into the now cleared area of land. Immediately Clark used his rollerskates to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing ability. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming stylish Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your pants?" "Inefficient captain its something we have never dected before in our oatmeal."
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Lily Cat
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Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 8:30 am
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| One day Captain James T. Kirk landed the Voyager in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of candy. Johnathan was barking at the ship "Get off my chocolate!" when first officer Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captin Kirk himself stepped out into the now cleared area of land. Immediately Clark used his rollerskates to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing ability. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming stylish Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your pants?" "Inefficient captain its something we have never dected before in our oatmeal."
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eisylefae
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Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 11:52 pm
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| One day Captain James T. Kirk landed the Voyager in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of candy. Johnathan was barking at the ship "Get off my chocolate!" when first officer Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captain Kirk himself stepped out into the now cleared area of land. Immediately Clark used his rollerskates to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing ability. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming stylish Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your pants?" "Inefficient captain its horses we have never detected before in our oatmeal."
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Lily Cat
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Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 11:58 pm
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| One day Captain Amanda T. Kirk landed the Voyager in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of candy. Johnathan was barking at the ship "Get off my chocolate!" when first officer Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captain Kirk himself stepped out into the now cleared area of land. Immediately Clark used his rollerskates to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing ability. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming stylish Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your pants?" "Inefficient captain its horses we have never detected before in our oatmeal."
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eisylefae
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 12:02 am
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| One day Captain Amanda T. Kirk landed the Vegetable in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of candy. Johnathan was barking at the ship "Get off my chocolate!" when first officer Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captain Kirk himself stepped out into the now cleared area of land. Immediately Clark used his rollerskates to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing ability. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming stylish Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your pants?" "Inefficient captain its horses we have never detected before in our oatmeal."
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Lily Cat
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 12:30 am
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| One day Captain Amanda T. Kirk landed the Vegetable in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of candy. Johnathan was barking at the ship "Get off my chocolate!" when first bartender Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captain Kirk himself stepped out into the now cleared area of land. Immediately Clark used his rollerskates to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing ability. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming stylish Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your pants?" "Inefficient captain its horses we have never detected before in our oatmeal."
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eisylefae
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 12:34 am
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| One day Captain Amanda T. Kirk landed the Vegetable in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of candy. Johnathan was barking at the ship "Get off my chocolate!" when first bartender Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captain Kirk himself stepped out into the now cleared area of land. Immediately Clark used his rollerskates to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing ability. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming stylish Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your pants?" "Inefficient captain these horses we have never detected before in our oatmeal."
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Lily Cat
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 12:38 am
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| One day Captain Amanda T. Kirk landed the Vegetable in Smallville in the Kent Farms field of candy. Johnathan was barking at the ship "Get off my chocolate!" when first bartender Spock, Dr. McCoy, and Captain Kirk himself stepped out into the now flammable area of land. Immediately Clark used his rollerskates to meet Johnathan on the field after hearing it land with his super hearing ability. "What are you doing? Leave here now!" Clark shouted at the three men. seeming stylish Kirk shot him with his phaser & all it did was tickle. "What manner of being is this? Spock your pants?" "Inefficient captain these horses we have never detected before in our oatmeal."
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