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Post new topic   Reply to topic I'm working on a song. <3
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 PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 12:27 pm Reply with quote        
    Yeah..x3 I've gotten a little written out now.

    Any suggestions? ;D


    Here's what I have so far:

    I promised I'd never hurt you.
    I promised I'd never leave.
    I promised I'd never make you cry.
    Well ha, joke's on you.
    I never promised I wouldn't lie.


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 PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 5:21 pm Reply with quote        
That's good so far! Maybe adding something about being gone forever. I don't know, I'm not the best song writer > 3>
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 PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 10:32 am Reply with quote        
looking good so far, keep at it :3
i use to be a song writer but found it very hard after awhile so i gave up on writing and just stuck to singing instead Happy

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 PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:00 am Reply with quote        
Ooh Im intruiged. Smile

What kind of song is it?

You could do what I do with some of my songs, so like you've used "I promised" as the recurrant in the first verse, you could change it on the second verse to "You promised" or "I lied" or.. you know? Mix it up a bit. ^_^

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 PostPosted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:04 am Reply with quote        
Is it a slow song? It seems as though it should be sung slowly and played with a guitar, if not loud/rock style. ^^
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 PostPosted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 1:08 am Reply with quote        
Wow...You wouldn't lie?? Is this supposed to be a love song? Because it sure doesn't sound like one...Or maybe its just me. A lot of times it's just me. Wink Whatever though. Nice...Besides that this person you're singing to...I feel bad for. Haha. Hope it's not me. Haha. That wasn't funny Sad
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 PostPosted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 3:16 pm Reply with quote        
thats an interesting song i like it although its not finished id like to congratulate you on it i think that you should continue with it to tell you the truth i already have 15 songs written its fun writing songs so keep it up Big Grin

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 PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 2:12 am Reply with quote        
[align=center]Hehe, sounds like a classic "in your face, you got it wrong I DON'T care about you" song to me

I write too, but mine are either dark or lovey dovey most of the time.
But I see some comedic potential in there
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