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Sister to Brother, How was it?
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 PostPosted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 1:04 am Reply with quote        
These are a few of m poems I've made over the years. I'd like some feedback on them and overall I hope you all enjoy.

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 PostPosted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 1:05 am Reply with quote        
Sister to Bother
Dedicated to my brother


Little Bro, let me tell you this
Life won’t always be fair
And there won’t always be bliss.
Life isn’t some crystal stair
And people you believe care for you
Won’t always be there.
People will tell you things, claiming them true
When in fact, they just want to mislead you.

Times will be rough
There will be many obstacles to pass
There may even come a time you find yourself in handcuffs
There will be people that’ll come to harass
You and hurt you bad
There will always be things that’ll make you mad
And even more to make you sad.

But hear this
And take it to heart
A time you ever need me, I’ll never miss
It won’t matter how far we are apart
There will be ways for me to reach you
Come work, finances, or flue
I’ll always be there for you.

I’ve lived the same life as you
I’ve shared your joys and pain
I’ve experienced all you’ve gone through
And though you especially dub me insane
Know that I will always love you.

I have faced pain
But haven’t given up
Even faced with hell’s fire and horrendous rain
That throws me down, I’ve always gotten up.

Don’t let the winds and rain push you down
Remember to smile more than frown
And though your world may be turned upside down
Never give up
Only you determine how life is fair.

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 PostPosted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 2:42 pm Reply with quote        
This reminds me of a poem I read in English...

http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/10388-Langston-Hughes-Mother-To-Son

But, yeah, not bad =D

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 PostPosted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 9:41 pm Reply with quote        
it was actually a creative response to that poem =]

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